User blog comment:Sweetsong256/Review- Lachy Can't Rhyme/@comment-11461515-20150329210853

You did a good job, I just feel like you needed to spend a little more time gathering your thoughts and listing them more clearly. I always spend a couple days perfecting my reviews, and I think all you need to do to make these better is spend more time on them. Just twenty minutes a day for a few days is enough, because you have the rest of the time in between to think more about the episode and why it does or doesn't work.